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Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 1:47 am
by mpoh98
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Hello All,

Here is my entry into GoH Challenge II - Prologue.


Enjoy!

“Feren, what about the Drow? Have you heard the rumors?” Feren, and his archer master and friend, Robin, were strolling down the street of the massive castle Marrock Fortress. Robin, always inquisitive, had heard rumors spread by the Marrock farmers, and now wondered if his Lord knows about them.
Feren inclined his head thoughtfully. “Yes, in a way. I have heard from my spy agency that there are rumors about the Drow invading our land. But I have not heard them personally myself, or if they have come this far inland to our island.”
Just as Robin was about to respond, their fine tuned ears heard whispering, faintly carried along by the wind. Feren scowled silently. That whispering was in no language from Avalonia, it was barely perceptible. Feren, motioning silence, slowly drew his sword, making not a sound. Quietly he and Robin inched along the wall, concentrating on following the faint murmur.
Slowly they approached the corner of the building. As Feren listened, he realized it was a man, and a Drow conversing. Feren’s eyebrows drew together thoughtfully. A Drow could only mean trouble. Listening closely, he was able to catch snatches of the conversation. “…….yes, we have finally arri……Lord Terrowin, prepare your troops……….Drow…….invasi……”
Feren nearly exploded with surprise. Lord Terrowin was a popular Lord among the leaders of Marrock, and one of his trusted advisors. Feren’s eyebrows clashed together in anger. This man, his friend, had sold himself over to the Drow. He could barely contain the anger inside, and, if it wasn’t for Robin restraining him, he almost dashed around the corner.
Controlling himself, Feren and Robin silently ran off, back to the keep, deep in thought. ‘This news is not good,’ Feren thought, what could it mean? ‘If only I could have heard the full conversation.’
For know, all he could do was ready his men, and wait for what was to come…. but, Feren vowed, whatever was coming, he would keep Marrock safe from this evil.


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4th Wall:

Whew! Glad I was able to get this entry in! After I wrote the story, I had no time to build until today, so I cranked out this small build quickly for the story. I am not satisfied with the roof, as I realized I forgot to add the overhang on one side, the brown wall is meh as well. But I am glad I was able to enter. :)

Enjoy!

God's Love,
~Matthew~

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 7:59 am
by Brickninja
I love it, Matt, those fig combos are fantastic! Keep up the great work! :)

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 1:37 pm
by mpoh98
Brickninja wrote:I love it, Matt, those fig combos are fantastic! Keep up the great work! :)
Thanks Brickninja! :)

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 3:32 pm
by Luke the Swift~
A great build here Matt. The story is also great. I really like the nice dull grey background. Really adds a suspicious feel to it.

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:06 pm
by mpoh98
Luke the Swift~ wrote:A great build here Matt. The story is also great. I really like the nice dull grey background. Really adds a suspicious feel to it.
Thanks Luke! Glad you like it, I had fun with the photo. :)

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:12 pm
by Sir Erathor
Really nice work Matt, this is one of those builds that is very enjoyable to look at. :)

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:25 pm
by StephenB
Such inspiring texture work going on here! :D

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:30 pm
by mpoh98
Sir Erathor wrote:Really nice work Matt, this is one of those builds that is very enjoyable to look at. :)
Thanks Sir Erathor! :)
StephenB wrote:Such inspiring texture work going on here! :D
Thank you StephenB, glad you like it. :)

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:39 pm
by Finn Tegotash
The texturing and details make this an awesome little build!

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 8:00 pm
by THE_BRICK_TIME_Team
Hello

Now that looks Noir-Style! And great story,too.

Best regards

BoB

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 8:10 pm
by mpoh98
Finn Tegotash wrote:The texturing and details make this an awesome little build!
Thank you Finn! :)
THE_BRICK_TIME_Team wrote:Hello

Now that looks Noir-Style! And great story,too.

Best regards

BoB
Thanks BoB! :D

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 5:14 pm
by Justin M
Stellar job Matthew! The lighting is extremely high-caliber. :)

Re: Ch II - Prologue - Listening In...

Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 8:38 pm
by mpoh98
Justin M wrote:Stellar job Matthew! The lighting is extremely high-caliber. :)
Thanks Justin! :D