MOC critiques thread.

[Luke the Swift~]

Hello all. This is a thread like the CCC MOC critiques thread. However I thought that I could leave it open to anyone to post in and, get critiques from all the LCC members who have input.

Now for some rule's:
1. only offer feedback to those who ask for it. Post your request in this thread.
2. Please only request one entry feedback per week, rather than just ask for feedback on everything. This is so the thread doesn't get super cluttered really fast.
3. Please provide a link to your entry in your request.
4. If you ask for a critique, you have to be prepared that that critique might be negative. I think we should try to highlight how a MOC could be improved, rather than just praise the good things.

So I will start off I guess.


Link: http://www.flickr.com/photos/95209908@N06/12780385823/
Lets hear what anyone has to say about this one.