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story im just begining (still needs a title)

Postby Curlycoos » Fri Apr 11, 2014 6:44 pm

https://www.flickr.com/photos/113661528 ... 783245213/
please look through the few photos and read the story

any comments, suggestions about both the Moc and the story please share them

Thankyou
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)

Postby mpoh98 » Fri Apr 11, 2014 7:09 pm

Nice work! I don't think a son would say that to his dad, but other than that, great story!
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)

Postby Curlycoos » Sat Apr 12, 2014 2:32 am

thankyou. i revised that bit it was harsher than that before haha.
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)

Postby Tower of Iron Will » Sat Apr 12, 2014 5:43 am

You have good start so far, keep it going..
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)

Postby Curlycoos » Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:01 pm

god been over a year since posted this been too busy to build but have still been collecting castle pieces and minifigs hopefully should get something built soon (fingers crossed)
so my story should continue and hopefully have a title (got a few ideas) so keep your eye out

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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)

Postby Wilfred of Ivanhoe » Tue May 12, 2015 2:55 pm

I really liked your story. It's a great start, but it leaves me wanting to know what happens next. :) Keep it up. You have a great start!
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)

Postby ameliadavies » Thu Nov 02, 2017 5:42 am

I read the story.. I really liked it. But i think , you still need to work on it. The images are amazing.
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