story im just begining (still needs a title)

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Curlycoos
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story im just begining (still needs a title)

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https://www.flickr.com/photos/113661528 ... 783245213/
please look through the few photos and read the story

any comments, suggestions about both the Moc and the story please share them

Thankyou
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Nice work! I don't think a son would say that to his dad, but other than that, great story!
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thankyou. i revised that bit it was harsher than that before haha.
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You have good start so far, keep it going..
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god been over a year since posted this been too busy to build but have still been collecting castle pieces and minifigs hopefully should get something built soon (fingers crossed)
so my story should continue and hopefully have a title (got a few ideas) so keep your eye out

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I really liked your story. It's a great start, but it leaves me wanting to know what happens next. :) Keep it up. You have a great start!
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I read the story.. I really liked it. But i think , you still need to work on it. The images are amazing.
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