Story Telling Vig: The World For You

footsteps · Post by **footsteps** » Mon Feb 11, 2008 1:53 am

As others have started threads to allow comments on their entries, I'll join the fray and present:

The World for You.

Scene One:
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Wag/C ... wfy013.jpg

Scene Two:
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Wag/C ... wfy023.jpg

Scene Three:
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Wag/C ... wfy033.jpg

Scene Four:
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Wag/C ... wfy043.jpg

Gallery when public:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=299934

Alan

Elbee · Post by **Elbee** » Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:04 am

I like this. I can feel the king's grief at the end. He conquered the world for her, but doesn't get to share it. Or is it he conquered the world for himself, but would give it back to have time with her instead? Either way.

footsteps · Post by **footsteps** » Tue Feb 12, 2008 2:31 am

Elbee wrote: Either way.

Yup, you got it!

Alan