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Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:10 pm
by Napoleon
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=449264

Here is a new MOC of mine: a remake of the classic Black Falcon Fortress. I spent one long night studying the set pics and making my own version. I even posed the figs in the same places and poses.

C&C welcome! :D

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:58 pm
by eNiGMa
This was immediately recognizable; you did a good job bringing the Black Falcons Fortress back into "our day" of Lego. It has that simple-yet-pleasing feel of the classic set, and the interior detail we've come to expect more from recent sets.

Perhaps the only thing I would change is the empty space at the outside front corners. Maybe some statues, or something, in place of the tiles?

I took particular notice of the gardening/farming going on in the courtyard. Good addition!

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:09 pm
by Napoleon
eNiGMa wrote:This was immediately recognizable; you did a good job bringing the Black Falcons Fortress back into "our day" of Lego. It has that simple-yet-pleasing feel of the classic set, and the interior detail we've come to expect more from recent sets.

Perhaps the only thing I would change is the empty space at the outside front corners. Maybe some statues, or something, in place of the tiles?

I took particular notice of the gardening/farming going on in the courtyard. Good addition!
Thanks a lot! :) I was hoping folks would recognize it.

Yeah, I thought about adding statues...I have those dark grey IJ ones, but they looked too small, plus, this is demolished now. I plan on making another castle MOC really soon, maybe I'll make some gargoyles then. :D

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 1:07 am
by Shadowviking
C&C, bullet point style:
-That's not how half timbered construction works.
-That parrot is pretty lost.
-The square protrusions between tower levels are funky.
-The rocks on the towers don't seem like the greatest defensive idea.
-I do not understand your roofing method at all. Green plates with black and brown ribs?

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 2:12 am
by Tower of Iron Will
I think it looks ok. Given the color scheme on the living quarters, I would have this place populated by "Dragon" knights instead of the Lion knights.
-Tower

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 10:35 pm
by quaraga
for no discernible reason the roofs in the back look (for lack of better term) off. otherwise I like the crunch of old and new in this MOC. It has a very clean solid look like the old castles and it has little bits like the rocks that are reminicent of King's castle siege.
-T.R.

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:34 pm
by Napoleon
Well, thanks everybody! :D I agree: this isn't perfect. I hope to get better and get "mad building skillz" like the master builders. At least, that's my goal. I could've done better on the roof by using slopes, but, alas, I do not have enough of them in non-bright colors, so, I used plates. I can't remember why I chose green...I should've used brown. :oops: As for the "parrot:" it was supposed to look like those various birds they used to carry messges. Oh, well, thanks for the tips and compliments, guys! :)

EDIT: This may sound stupid, but what is half-timbered construction?

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 3:59 am
by Shadowviking
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timber_framing
I assume that's what you're trying to emulate with the yellow there. That's what the printed wall panels in a lot of classic castle sets represented.

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:12 am
by Napoleon
Shadowviking wrote:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timber_framing
I assume that's what you're trying to emulate with the yellow there. That's what the printed wall panels in a lot of classic castle sets represented.
Ah, thanks! I thought it might be tudor, but I wasn't sure. Yeah, I could have made it pretty realistic, but I was restricting myself to building it like a set, where they don't go overboard with details that raise the price.

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:22 am
by Grimmbeast7
That fortress is well done. I like the courtyard. But it would be cooler if you added Black Falcons 8) . I wish I could make something like this. I have the legos but not the sorting or the time :cry:

Re: Black Falcon Fortress 2.0

Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:02 pm
by Napoleon
Grimmbeast7 wrote:That fortress is well done. I like the courtyard. But it would be cooler if you added Black Falcons 8) . I wish I could make something like this. I have the legos but not the sorting or the time :cry:
Sorry for the late reply.

Thanks! Yeah, sorting can take forever and isn't always fun. Stuff like technic pieces are always the hardest.