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LCC Planning for a Raid - Updated pics!

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Updated with better pics! 10/15/2013

Once moderated... http://mocpages.com/moc.php/372378

Northeast of Grahnhaven, a camp has been established for resistance and refugees in the dense forests at the foot of the mountains. The campsite was originally setup as a celebratory hunting expedition in honor of the queen’s coronation, but necessity has turned it into a camp of refugee site. Henri, his father, the Loreesi Ambassador to Grahnhaven, and the Lenfel Ambassador to Grahnhaven meet to discuss plans to raid a camp of the queen’s army for supplies.

*Notes- I'm working on getting a better pic setup... in theory my pictures will get better...
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Nice job! :D I agree, better pictures would help A TON. Do you like critique? If so, I will comment again with critique.
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Neat build, and cool pointy tent.
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I like the tent, but a good picture would be great, I'd like to see the details! :wink:
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I don't mind critique at all. Critique away!

I have to admit... I'm still not happy with the roof of the pavilion/tent though. Seems a little too simplistic.

Also that baseplate filled up a lot quicker than I thought it would.
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Would love to see some close up shots. Basic story could be fleshed out a little. Realistic story line and enjoyed your MOC.
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Updated with better pics! Not drastically better, but an improvement in picture quality.

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Nice, they are much better than before. :D

Some help with the pictures:
1. Try to take them with a clean white (or whatever color your prefer) background, so it looks neater.
2. Get good lighting, outside works really well, just let nature do its work.
3. NO FLASH! Don't use flash, just make sure the lighting is bright enough, flash lights up the creation in only certain spots.


Hope this helps!
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Yep, I agree with Matt, they're looking pretty good. Follow his pointers and you should do a lot better.
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Mmmm, Matt's definately right there. I've always taken photos with a plain background, but I used to take them all inside. I've found it to be much better outside :)
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